Sunday, February 23, 2014

Poetry Reading Response: Photography

Panchita Lopez-Li                                                                                  Class 808
                                  
                              Reading Response: Photography by Nikki Giovanni

     “Photography” by Nikki Giovanni shows that everyone has their own passion and will describe/express their passions in a different way. In the poem “Photography,” Nikki Giovanni shows her passion of photography and what photography means to her in life. In the poem, he compares parts of the camera to the human body, and describes what poetry is.  The poet uses imagery, symbolism, and metaphors as a literary device in the poem to show readers what photography means to her in life, and why she is passionate about photography.
      Imagery is vivid descriptions of the five senses. In Nikki Giovanni’s poem “Photography,” there is use of imagery. Two examples of imagery are “Watching the red sun bleed/ into the ocean” and “to forget the ice and ravages/of winter yet.” I think these are examples of imagery because I can see vivid, detailed pictures of them in my mind, when I read those lines from the poem. When I read the lines “watching the red sun bleed/ into the ocean,” I picture a sunset at the beach, the rays of the sun sinking behind the water. I also see a woman standing knee-deep in ocean water, taking pictures of the sunset. When I read the lines “to forget the ice and ravages/ of winter yet,” I have a picture in my mind of a blizzard with hail raining down from every direction. There is a man attempting to climb up a hill full of snow. The poet uses imagery to make her readers see what she is writing. I think the poet it showing us that photography is a necessity in her life, and that regardless of conditions rain or shine; she will take photographs for as long as she lives.
      Symbolism is an object/action/person that represents a greater importance in a text, often emphasized in some way. The poem “Photography” has many examples of photography. The poet compares parts of the human body to a camera. Some examples are “the eye we are told/ is a camera”, “but the film is the heart,” and “then the photo assistant is god.” I think since she is comparing parts of the body to a camera that you all need these parts to make a good “photo.” In order to take a good photo, you need the basic parts of the camera, like film and the camera itself. Another thing I observed is the line “then the photo assistant is god.” My inference for this line is the photo assistant helps take photos and maybe edits/prints them, for the whole world to see and spreads the photo throughout the world.
      A metaphor is a comparison of unlike things; stating that something is something else. In the poem “Photography,” there are many metaphors. Some examples of metaphors are “the eye we are told/ is a camera,” “but the film is the heart”, and “then the photo assistant is god.” The poet is comparing parts of the human body to the camera. I think what the poet means by “the eye we are told/ is a camera” is that we take everything in using our eyes, so our eyes are like a camera. For “but the film is the heart,” I think the poet means that our heart keeps us alive, like how you need film in order for the camera to take pictures. And lastly, when the poet writes; “then the photo assistant is god” I think she means that the photo assistant develops the product.

     This text connects to the world because everyone has their own passion and will show/describe it in their own and different way. Nikki Giovanni showed her passion for photography with imagery, symbolism, and metaphors in her poem “Photography.” She also shows deep detail in describing photography.

Thursday, February 6, 2014

Monday Muses: Poetry Writing Prompts

Six-Word Memoir: New bike falling confidently back up

When I was 7 years old, I got a new bike for Christmas. I was so excited to learn how to ride on the bike. My father wanted to teach me how to ride a bike without training wheels. I thought it would be easy, so I agreed. However, it wasn't as easy as I thought. I kept falling in the dirt, multiple times, unable to catch my balance. All the other kids made it look easy. "I can't do this."I kept thinking to myself. Finally, I sat down on the ground, exhausted. My father bent down, and laughed. "Panchita, there in times in life you're gonna fall down, and maybe break a couple of bones along the way, but you still gotta haul yourself on up." With those words in my head, I sniffled and nodded, brushing the dirt off my pants and got back on the bike. My father held the side of my bike to stop me from wobbling, and I mastered the art of riding a bike. I realized that sometimes, there is going to be hard times in life but you need to get past the obstacles in order to achieve something.

Sunday, February 2, 2014

Reading Response: Critical Reading Question

Reading Response Question: How does this text deal with individuals and groups? Are people acting alone and in competition with one another, or does the text help us imagine people working together?

 The book I am currently reading is "I am Number Four,"by Pittacus Lore. This book is about a teen alien called John Smith that comes from a planet called Lorien. He is running from Mogadorians on Planet Earth, and there are nine aliens like him called Garde, known by their numbers. They are scattered in different places on Earth. Mogadorians are aliens from a different planet called Mogadore. Their focus is to take over Planet Lorien and kill all the Loriens. Numbers 1, 2, and 3 were killed. When one of the Garde are killed, the others will get a scar embedded in their ankle, symboling one of the Garde have died. Each of the Garde children have a Cêpan, which is a protector/guardian also from the planet Lorien. Cêpans have to train the Garde children. Garde children have powers to help them survive and defeat the Mogadorians. John lives in Paradise, Ohio, which is a small quiet town. John goes to high school, meeting a girl he likes and has a new friend. The girl's name is Sarah Hart, and his friend's name is Sam Goode. In the end of the book, John trusts Sarah and Sam enough that he could tell them about who he was and where he came from.
  In this book, many people are working together. The nine Garde children are of the same species and work together, trying to find each other. They are against the Mogadorians, and trying to stay alive from getting killed. The people in Lorien are all working together. They are also tryiing to protect their planet. The Mogadorians are also in a group working together. They are trying to kill the Garde children and take over the planet Lorien. All the Cêpans and Garde children are working together too. They help each other and would die for one another. However, the planet Lorien and the planet Mogadore are in competition because Planet Mogadore is trying to take over planet Lorien, and planet Lorien is trying to protect it. The Mogadorians are also in competition with Garde and their Cêpans.
  At the beginning of the book, Henrí (John's Cêpan) was very close-minded about their identity and did not trust or tell anyone. Henrí was not sure about telling Sam that they are aliens, but because Sam risked his life to save Henrí from the Mogadorians, he deserved a explanation. John was against telling Sam and Sarah because he didn't want to get them involved, but they insisted so he told them. He also did not tell them because he did not trust them at first.

Monday, January 20, 2014

Nonfiction Article Reading Response


  The article “The High Price of Cheap Fashion” is about Americans becoming more aware at where, how, and under what conditions their clothes are developed. This started happening when many people learned news about a factory that collapsed in Bangladesh, killing more than 1,100 workers and injuring 2,500 more. The workers at the factory made clothes to sell in companies in the United States and Europe. Investigators found out that the building owner had illegally added extra floors and heavy machines that the building couldn’t support. This accident is one of the worst accidents in the clothing industry, making other countries aware of this problem and calling for extra safety measures.  Today, U.S. companies manufacture most of their clothing in countries like China, Bangladesh, and Vietnam. The factory workers only earn a fraction of what United States workers make. China makes 40% of U.S.’s clothing. Bangladesh makes 6%. Since now there are more new stores, there are more frequent purchases. Today, Americans on average buy 68 garments of clothing and eight pair of shoes per year. Each American throws out 10 pounds worth of clothing on average every year.
  However, the huge change in manufacturing to developing countries has provided jobs for millions of poor people in third nations. Many people work in “sweatshops” under dangerous and difficult conditions and face low wage. China is in the lead for the world’s “biggest ready-to-wear clothing” producer, but business has decreased since the workers’ pay raise has gone up.  Currently, the average Chinese clothing factory worker makes $1.26 per hour. This has caused major retailers like Gap and Sears, to shift some business into Indonesia, Thailand, and Bangladesh. Bangladesh is second to China, but has one of the worse practices in the global garment industry. Workers must work long hours and face unsafe conditions. After the factory collapse happened, Bangladesh’s government made strict inspections and announced that they Bangladesh’s pay wage will be raised.  However, Bangladeshi officials warn that these drastic changes may damage Bangladesh’s economy.  Fifty major retailors recently signed a pact to spend at least $60 million over the next 5 years to monitor safety in Bangladesh’s clothing factories. It would also cost less then 10 cents for one garment of clothing with clothes to be produced with more worker protections. Slowly, Bangladesh’s garment industry will change and more protection provided for factory workers will develop.
   America is starting to have American apparel firms to be fair-trade certified (meaning that it’s factories have been inspected for safety and workers’ pay and found to be fair) like a yoga clothing company called PrAna. More people are looking for clothing that are fair trade and made in America. 

Sunday, January 5, 2014

Reading Response: What really hard things are happening in this text? Are these things happening in the world now? Where?
\ The book I am currently reading now is "Story of a Girl" by Sara Zerr. The main character is seventeen years old, and her name is Deanna Lambert. When she was thirteen, she  was caught by her father doing  sexual things with Tommy Weber, her brother's (Darren Lambert) best friend.  Because of this, her and her family's life changed forever. Four years after, she is still being ignored by her father. She also known as the "school slut/skank" in her school. Everyone bullies and ignores her. Her family is considered a failure because of her, and Deanna deals with sexual harassment. Throughout the book, Deanna becomes independent by getting a job so she can move out with her brother,his girlfriend, and baby. She also learns how to stand up for herself when she gets bullied. This book has many social issues like bullying, teen pregnancy, sexual harassment, and poverty.  
   Teen pregnancy is a issue in this book. Deanna's older brother, Darren gets his girlfriend Stacy,pregnant. They have a baby called April. The couple move in with Darren's parents, since they have no money to support themselves. Darren and his girlfriend argued about everything, from hair color to types of baby bottles. At a point in the book, Stacy is so exhausted that she goes to a party for two days and leaves Darren and April (Pg 98-114) Teen pregnancy is a social issue everywhere in the world.  Another social issue in this book is poverty. Deanna's whole family is struggling to meet ends, they all work very hard to pay the rent, and they don't have a lot of money for shopping. Deanna gets a job at a pizza place, to save up her money for moving out and for her own pleasures. She also saves the money for moving out of her house one day with Stacy, Darren, and April. Deanna thinks she is a part of their family, and that they are incomplete without her. However, Darren and April don't agree. (Pg 112-114) Poverty is also a big issue everywhere in the world.
   Sexual harassment plays an important part in this book. Throughout the story, Deanna gets sexually harassed by the senior boys in her school. Even when she was going to the food court with her best friend, she got touched in between her thighs from her school, since she was known as the "school skank." Sexual harassment happens everywhere in the world.
   Those were all big issues in the book, but the biggest issue in this book was bullying. The kids in her school call her a skank and a slut (Pg 6, Deanna POV):
  "Bruce chimed in. "Why do you front, Lambert? Why pretend you're not a skank when you know you are? He gestured to himself and the guys around him, "We know you are. You know you are. And, um, your dad knows you are, so..."
 A voice called down from the hall:"Don't you guys have some kittens to go torture or something?" 
 Jason had never sounded so good.
"You don't even want a piece of this, punk," Tucker said, shouting over his shoulder.
 Jason kept walking towards us, with his usual no-hurry slouch, black boots scuffing along the floor  like it was just too much effort to pick up his feet. My hero. My best friend. "
She only has her best friend Jason to fight off the bullies and stand up for her. People in her school talk behind her back, and make up rumors about her. They even bully her at her job.
   All of these social issues happen everywhere and everyday in the world. Children get bullied in school everyday, and don't know how to stand up for themselves. Teenagers get pregnant, and are unable to support themselves and the baby. People get sexually harassed everyday and many are too afraid to defend themselves, and hide in their shadows of fear. People are in poverty everyday, and don't have a place to live or food to eat. This book shows what our world is like now, and all the social issues in the world. Throughout the story, Deanna changes from dependent to independent. She learns how to stand up for herself and let go of her past. She becomes a better person. 


Tuesday, December 17, 2013

Argument Essay:Final Draft:Should The Perks of Being a Wallflower be Banned for Sixth and Seventh Graders?

Argument Essay:Final Draft:Should The Perks of Being a Wallflower be Banned for Sixth and Seventh Graders?
Books containing sexual content, explicit language, drugs, drinking, and rape can
be alarming, especially to sixth and seventh graders. They can cause the reader to do what the character is doing in the book. It can affect them negatively or positively. A specific book that contains inappropriate content is The Perks of Being a Wallflower: By Steven Chbosky. Even though it is a good book containing many morals, sixth and seventh grade students and below should not read it because it contains sexual content, explicit language, drugs, drinking, and rape.
Sixth and seventh graders should not read this book because it contains explicit language and smoking.  “I agreed, but then my brother started saying how my sister was just a bitchy dyke.” (81) This doesn’t just show that there is cursing in the book, but also there is fighting between brothers and sisters.  If siblings fight, they may be influenced by this book to curse when fighting with each other. Another example of why this book should not be read by sixth and seventh graders:
“Can I have a cigarette?” I said. I couldn’t bring myself to say “burn a smoke.”
Not for my first one. I just couldn’t. When I lit it I didn’t cough. It actually felt
soothing. I know that it was bad in a health class way, but it was true.”
The character in the book that is doing this is only a freshman, meaning he is only 14-15 years old. If sixth or seventh graders read this, they may be influenced to do the same when they turn older. They may not understand what is wrong about smoking.
Another reason why sixth and seventh graders should not read this book is because it has sexual content and a rape scene. I think that sixth and seventh graders will not understand what is happening in that part, and they are also not mature enough to read that part of the book. This is a part of the book containing sexual content: “And I opened the door to the basement and my sister and this boy were naked. He was on top of her and her legs were draped on either side of the couch. And she screamed to me in a whisper- “Get out. You pervert.” (12) There are at least 3 more scenes like this in this book.
However, the author of (“The ‘sick-lit’ books aimed at children. It’s a disturbing phenomenon. Tales of teenage cancer, self harm, and suicide...) states: “...these books don’t spare any detail of the harsh realities of terminal illness, depression, and death. Most are also liberally peppered with sex and swearing.”
The author of “Darkness Too Visible,” says “The argument in favor of such novels is that they validate the teen experience, giving voices to tortured adolescents who would otherwise be voiceless.” If they had faced these experiences, they would know they are not alone. Also, if they were to encounter these problems, they would know how to deal with them. They would not feel alone because they would know other people have these problems and issues to deal with too.

I think that sixth and seventh graders should not read this book because it includes sexual content, rape, swearing, underage drinking, and drugs. I believe that sixth and seventh graders would not know what these things are, and what they mean. If they read this, they will learn more about sex, drugs, rape, drugs, and drinking.  They are also not mature enough to read the book, and may be influenced to follow in the main character’s footsteps.

Sunday, December 15, 2013

What really hard things are happening in this text? Are these things happening in the world now? Where?

The book I am currently reading now is "Story of a Girl" by Sara Zerr. The main character is seventeen years old, and her name is Deanna Lambert. She was caught by her father doing sexual things with her brother's best friend (Tommy Webber) in the back of his car. Four years after, she is still being ignored by her father. She also known as the "school slut" in her school. Everyone bullies and ignores her. Her family is considered a failure, and Deanna dealt with sexual harassment. Throughout the book, Deanna becomes independent by getting a job so she can move out with her brother,his girlfriend, and baby. She also learns how to stand up for herself when she gets bullied.
  Teen pregnancy is a issue in this book. Deanna's older brother, Darren gets his girlfriend pregnant, they move in with his parents, since they have no money to support them. They argued about everything, from hair color to going to parties. Teen pregnancy is a social issue everywhere in the world. Another social issue in this book is poverty. Deanna's whole family is struggling to meet ends, they all work very hard to pay the rent, and they don't have a lot of money for shopping. Poverty is also a serious issue in the world.
 Sexual harassment plays an important part in this book. Throughout the story, Deanna gets sexually harassed by the senior boys in her school. Even when she was going to the food court with her best friend, she got touched in between her thighs from her school, since she was known as the "school skank." Sexual harassment happens everywhere in the world.
Those were all big issues in the book, but the biggest issue in this book was bullying. The kids in her school call her a skank and a slut. She gets bullied everyday, with only her best friend Jason to fight off the bullies and stand up for her. People in her school talk behind her back, and make up rumors about her. They even bully her at her job.
All of these social issues happen everywhere and everyday in the world. Children get bullied in school everyday, and don't know how to stand up for themselves. Teenagers get pregnant, and are unable to support themselves and the baby. People get sexually harassed everyday and many are too afraid to defend themselves, and hide in their shadows of fear. People are in poverty everyday, and don't have a place to live or food to eat. This book shows what our world is like now. Throughout the story, Deanna changes from dependent to independent. She learns how to stand up for herself and let go of her past. She becomes a better person.